My initial approach to this essay is similar to that of the first. I will introduce the evidence gathered and then my own believes on the subject and how they can positively impact the reader. There are a couple things I want to change about this essay. I want to relate more of my ideas back to the texts discussed in class and connect these readings to one other. Due to the nature of this topic, I am also providing much more resistance to what the authors are writing and will need to address this appropriately. I also want to organize this essay slightly different from the last to hopefully provide a more streamlined reading experience. I want to create a deeper connection with the topic and form a deeper bond with my essay. I think this will be much easier to achieve because the topic is such a relevant one.