Global peer review Essay two

The best example of peer review I made today is on Abbie’s essay. Twice I mentioned places and idea from texts that I thought would compliment her claim well. In my first comment of this type, I gave a general comment saying that there is plenty evidence that could help support her claim. In the second comment of this type, I mentioned a specific section of Turkle that I thought would improve this part of her essay. I could have improved these comments by providing the page number of the section I was referencing. I believe these are some of the better comments I have given in this class so far. They allow the author to expand upon their ideas and offer more evidence and support to their claim, making there argument stronger.

Global peer review Essay one

Alex’s essay with comments from Jack and I.

Jack’s essay with comments from Alex and I.